Editing

Has been going slowly. Work has been too busy. Currently staring at chapter 15. Only 5 more to go though (+ external feedback)

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October 19, 2014

Feedback

So I received the first edits for chapter 1 of Feathers Fall today. There was a mixup in that she used the old pre edited version instead of the latest version I had available. It didn’t matter though because despite my own numerous passes through, pretty much every comment she made as still relevant. It was brutal. And I love it. It’s so good to get another person’s eyes over your work. When you get so familiar with something you really don’t see the flaws, even if they’re obvious.

Curious as always is the difference between Australian and US terminology. Something that seems so obvious to me raises some weird questions. Good times.

With some interpretation, I was able to make all the feedback work for chapter 1. There were some solid improvements. On to chapter 2.

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August 3, 2014

Dat moment

When you re-read the first moment your two characters fall for each other. Right in the feels.

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July 7, 2014

It’s done

First draft of Feathers Fall complete. Woah. Big deal. That was a long one. The ending came quickly.

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July 3, 2014

Creative burst

After a brief Diablo 3 addiction, I have had a short creative burst to add a few more words to Feathers Fall. The current scene has a poetry to it that I’m enjoying and it just feeds on itself.

I really need to finish this damn thing so I can move on.

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April 21, 2014

Well, this is easier

I didn’t have Aiko 4 so I didn’t know it came with a build in american style face morph. After acquiring that, and with some Gen X transfer to copy the morph across to Genesis, it ends up with quite the appealing and easy to use character.
Aiko GenX Disney4

Aiko GenX Disney5

Oh yeah, I should probably do some writing

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February 16, 2014

Headcolds

It is so hard to get anything done with a headcold. Can’t work, can’t write, can’t concentrate. Blegh. It’ll be a few days before I probably pick up FF and write again.

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February 4, 2014

I’ll get back to writing soon, promise

More messing around with my new character:
disney 9

disney 13

disney 12

disney 11

disney 10

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January 30, 2014

Disney DAZ

So after a recent trip to the movies to see the Disney movie Frozen, I decided to challenge my DAZ skills to see how close I could get a character to looking like one of the more Disney 3D characters while still making sure it looks good

The result? Some things are difficult to impossible to truly achieve, particularly the eyes, but getting something that at least “looks good” was achievable. I really like the result, it’s different enough to not be a straight out copy while still having a lot of the appeal of their stylised characters:
disney 7
disney 8

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January 29, 2014

Spock

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January 18, 2014